Critical Analysis

Danielle Diew
2 min readMay 31, 2023

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A Reality Check Poem

Danielle Diew

A million acts of violence

When I finally speak out

You complain I am no longer silent

Millions of atrocities

But your concern is how I speak of it

A million and one abuses

But your issue is how my trauma is expressed

A million and one days in enslavement

Yet you continue to tell me to wait

“It’s not your turn for freedom yet

You can’t be counted as human yet

You didn’t ask well enough

Go back to your isolation”

Where is YOUR critical analysis?

A million acts of trafficking

And you’re telling me to “be polite”

To what end?

To hear “not yet”

With a tone that makes you appear civil?

No!

You sound tone deaf

Using language you think makes you seem respectable?

If my protest makes me not a “good” person

Perhaps you should look in the mirror

Ask yourself why you judge

Define “good” then

By my definition

Labeling a survivor “not good”

Because her protest isn’t polite

As her entire population is being eradicated

Makes you the antithesis

Of what you attempt to present

Feckless AND abusive

Keep your opinions to yourself

Using the same manner and language

As slavers

5.31.23 yet you think this is “civil”?

I’ll pass

YOU failed to garner my trust or respect

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Danielle Diew
Danielle Diew

Written by Danielle Diew

Pandora Whistleblower, Lolita Express, Torture Survivor. Life is a right, fight for equality. Spiritual Warfare. THIS IS MY ONLY SOCIAL MEDIA ACCOUNT.

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